Joker, google "E-Prime" + "English Prime". Skip all the "English Prime minister" instances that Google will show, though. Read all you can about it. I did so. I have CP'ed many Internet-published articles and writings on EP and saved them to my HD.
Karen has continually helped me understand more and more of it.
Have you ever tried doing it in your own native language? I tried it in mine and it worked!
I think you've just started practicing. Your last posts show it!
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On the topic.
you're doing fine!
