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Square · 01-16-2006, 07:44 PM

Hmm, something I have just noticed: you should change "Joan is smart" to "Joan is wealthy", as I hardly see how "being smart" helps making $500,000 a year.

(example #1 under suggestion #2)

01-16-2006, 07:44 PM	#2 (permalink)
Square Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 18	Hmm, something I have just noticed: you should change "Joan is smart" to "Joan is wealthy", as I hardly see how "being smart" helps making $500,000 a year. (example #1 under suggestion #2)