Yet another short excerpt of a letter - e-prime

Marcio_Osorio · 04-08-2008, 12:13 AM

Home Hunters, Inc.
65 Scenic View
Mellow Creek, TX

Dear Sir:

I am looking for a four bedroomed house for my son who is shortly leaving the army. He has a wife and three children and is going to work for the Civil Service in Mellow Creek.

How would you get this E-Primed?

Karen · 04-08-2008, 12:56 AM

By April 30th, my son will leave the army and join the Civil Service in Mellow Creek.

Before April 20th, he desires and would like to get settled in a four bedroom home for his wife and three children.

At present, he has requested me to help him find a home that meets his requirements.

Marcio_Osorio · 04-08-2008, 11:35 PM

Karen, thank you again.

Karen · 04-09-2008, 12:16 PM

Hi Marcio, I enjoy doing the translations for you. You also give it a go and let me see how you would respond. K

Marcio_Osorio · 04-09-2008, 11:47 PM

Admitting it takes a bit of creativity and and some oomph to get it done down here. I'll attempt to do it your way (putting the date first), however.